What do you guys think of my new makeup review blog?

http://colorarts.livejournal.com/





I'm up for request if you have livejournal and can message me :)





Also how do I have it be known that I have a makeup blog now so people can know to request? thanks!What do you guys think of my new makeup review blog?
Uh, honestly I couldn't even make it past a sentence or two. Your grammar is awful and it was FAR too distracting to read.What do you guys think of my new makeup review blog?
I think that the idea is good, but your writing needs more oomph. It's a bit bland right now.











I hope this helps!
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